BLAM.
I wasn't sure the radio monologue would work until I wrote the last line and cut it up to fit the layouts. It works. I like it. It's incredibly more effective than Another Silent Page would have been, and foreshadows the context of the impending flashback.
Yes, flashback - another one! Hang on to your seats, folks - HERE COMES THE PLOT!
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